Comments on: My brain has done a mental http://amihumanyet.co.uk/my-brain-has-done-a-mental/ as lame as it gets Wed, 26 May 2010 12:52:53 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: michele http://amihumanyet.co.uk/my-brain-has-done-a-mental/comment-page-1/#comment-55 michele Wed, 11 Feb 2009 11:41:09 +0000 http://amihumanyet.co.uk/?p=659#comment-55 Really enjoyed this. Nice work. Really enjoyed this. Nice work.

]]> By: Artsmonkey http://amihumanyet.co.uk/my-brain-has-done-a-mental/comment-page-1/#comment-48 Artsmonkey Fri, 23 Jan 2009 15:20:04 +0000 http://amihumanyet.co.uk/?p=659#comment-48 Oh. So lovely to share that with you. Uncurl now and let your gift sit comfortably on your lap, love it and nurture it - like your memories it has grown with you into something majestic! Oh. So lovely to share that with you. Uncurl now and let your gift sit comfortably on your lap, love it and nurture it – like your memories it has grown with you into something majestic!

]]> By: BrentBillock http://amihumanyet.co.uk/my-brain-has-done-a-mental/comment-page-1/#comment-47 BrentBillock Fri, 23 Jan 2009 15:18:33 +0000 http://amihumanyet.co.uk/?p=659#comment-47 Really nice. I like how delicately you mixed contrasting personality traits into your narrator. Considerate and even tender towards his handler and the girl, but always making the brutal calculations of a natural predator. Good luck with the book! Really nice.

I like how delicately you mixed contrasting personality traits into your narrator. Considerate and even tender towards his handler and the girl, but always making the brutal calculations of a natural predator.

Good luck with the book!

]]> By: Foss http://amihumanyet.co.uk/my-brain-has-done-a-mental/comment-page-1/#comment-46 Foss Fri, 23 Jan 2009 14:46:04 +0000 http://amihumanyet.co.uk/?p=659#comment-46 You have coulrophobia! You have coulrophobia!

]]> By: Mattie J (Brasspistol) http://amihumanyet.co.uk/my-brain-has-done-a-mental/comment-page-1/#comment-45 Mattie J (Brasspistol) Fri, 23 Jan 2009 14:41:21 +0000 http://amihumanyet.co.uk/?p=659#comment-45 I really liked this story. Short and bitter sweet, it's always a test of your skill to write from such a different perspective. I saw a lot of interesting themes in here, I get what you mean about being rough but it still works. Great imagery. Cheers MJ I really liked this story. Short and bitter sweet, it’s always a test of your skill to write from such a different perspective. I saw a lot of interesting themes in here, I get what you mean about being rough but it still works.

Great imagery.

Cheers
MJ

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